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Ok so for the people who don't know Antonio is Spain and Lovino (Lovi) is Romano~
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"Stupid!"

"Jerkface!"

"Potato eatin-"

"Baka!"

"What the hell does that even mean?!?"

"Exactly!" This is what happened every morning at Lovino's when you came and visit. You and Lovino have been friends for a long time now and always had an argument everyday, what a strange relationship you have there.

Lovino stares at you quietly his eye twitching slightly. "Fine you win this time!" He takes a sip of water.

"Awww yeah!" You hold your hand up for a high-five at Antonio. Antonio is usually there just to make matters... well... Entertaining

"Eh, ________, you should apologize to Lovi~ He is very sensitive!" Antonio goes over to Lovino and starts stroking his head in a very motherly like manner . You giggle at that

"EHHH?! ANTONIO!!!!" Lovino's face turns red and whacks him.

"Ouch!" Antonio steps back and comes back to his seat.

"Anyways, it has been quite a while ______." Lovino brings up. He is right, it has been. You used to live in Italy and then started to go to school in America when your father got a job there. You come now and then to visit your friends and family.

"Yeah your right, it has been…"  You stare into Lovino's eyes. You hated him yet you loved him, he is like the brother you have never had. "You know what, I need to go take a piss." You get up and leave the table.

On the way to the bathroom in this huge house you get to an area where you don't ever recall being too.

"Oh shit, am I lost?" You go around through halls and find yourself back where you started.

"Hey ________ are you lost?" You turn around and there is Lovino staring at you leaning against the wall like a 'cool' dude.

"Lost? Pffft- I'm-." His eyes narrow, still on you, "Yes, yes I am… I am very much lost. Show me the way? Perhaps? Be a gentleman? Maybe?" You go near him and he takes your hand.

"Come on let's go." He starts to lead you though out the mansion. He's holding your hand.

He hasn't held your hand since forever, well since you guys where little playing 'house' and crap. He stops for a moment and looks at you. His face is bright red.

"You ok-" You were cut off when his lips came in contact with yours. You stood there shocked for a moment and then you noticed that you actually didn't mind this, you loved him for so long. You passionately kissed him back. He moved his hand up your shirt and licked your lips and for an entrance then you kicked him.

"Ouch!" He stopped, "What the hell was that for?! I though you liked that!"

"Yo! Don't be doing that here and now! I need to go to the bathroom you idiot!" You yelled at him. You both stopped and started to laugh. This is what it was like back then during 'house'. He was the father and you where the mother. You guys argued from time to time and got along for the rest. You both held hands as you made your way to the bathroom.
Yay~! I tried out a one shot! Yay~! (Usually my HetaliaxReaders end up with like, 3 chapters) :iconyayromanoplz:

Just a random Romano x Reader and stuff stuff~

.... Romano don't you try anything in the bathroom (Honhonhonhonhonhonhon) :iconlustyromanoplz:
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This is a wonderful crack at a one shot. However it got kind of rushed the further you got into the story . Your grammar is also not the best. You got kind of quick, and there wasn't any explanatory reason of why Lovino w ould lash out like that. It was adorable, yet it neds more detail and a stronger conviction. It was like reading an episode of actual Hetalia, short and not giving the fans everything. However, it is a wonderful peice of art, and i would not mind seeing a part 2 lemon, if you are up to it :3
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Bermuda-aka-Lilly Featured By Owner Jan 7, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
OHNHONHONHONHONHONHON XD
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FuzzyGirl49 Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What's with the face... O.O
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OneWingedNekoCas Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Very funny hahaha good job! awesome!
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anw1008 Featured By Owner Jun 7, 2013
Je fais partie française et je peux parler à

(i am part french and i can speak it to)

par la façon dont j'aime votre histoire un bon écrivain

(by the way i love your story your a good writer)
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Ah! Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! :heart:

I wish I could speak another language ; u ;
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anw1008 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013
i learned from Google translate and you can too just translate words from english into the language you want to learn
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BloodyRoseCosplays Featured By Owner Aug 27, 2013
Or get a (language) to ( language ) dictionary cuz sometimes Google is wrong xD
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Silvermoonlitsoul Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I'd stampede over him if he doesn't get me to the bathroom quick.
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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moot3100 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"I gotta go piss."
...Real classy, me. Real classy.
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jeanette4hedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
I've said that before in front of my guy friends and they looked at me like 'WTF'
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moot3100 Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I said it before in front of teachers and when they looked at me funny I said I was practicing my Spanish and quickly walked away...XD
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jeanette4hedgehog Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013
Guys are always like WTF when I say it.....
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:iconpastachan415:
PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOlz~
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Lovely-Lonley-Night Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013
*nosebleed* oh god sometimes you have to let the French side of you come out.....
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL yeah~ :iconyayfranceplz:
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Hetalialover76 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Ya know, i found out i have FRENCH in me O_O ~ ohononon ~
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:iconpastachan415:
PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Whats strange is that i hadtto take a piss while i was reading this XD
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I read this.again and i STILL has to piss XD
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Go to the bathroom then! XD

Hopefully Romano won't jump out of the shower curtain = u =
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:iconresidentevilhetalia:
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
I just saw a dark shadow walk up the steps and standing there...im not going up there
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconohmygodplz:
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:iconresidentevilhetalia:
ResidentEvilHetalia Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student General Artist
Its still there and its been 10 minutes DX :iconscaredplz:
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
= n =
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MrsTomlinson214 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Writer
OUT OF MY BATHROOM, DAMMIT!
Toni: You sound like him, chica~
SHUT UP JUST GET HIM OUT I HAVE TO PEE
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
So like what happened in the bathroom? I want to know ;)..
Oh and yeah.... Great fic!! This is awesome, epic and faqing epically awesome!!!!
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:iconpastachan415:
PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'll leave the bathroom part to your imagination~. . .

Thank you so much XD
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
Hell yeahz!!! I got it all in my head.. Love your profile icon thingy by the way (I don't know what to call it)......
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL, what happens = u =

Thank you~! :heart:
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Pikachu5091 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Well~... I- *thinks for a second* Um.. So. *nosebleeds and passes out*

My Oc (which is named Tsuki): Um... What she was trying to say is.. Um.. How do I put it in words? Oh well, she was thinking of.... Very inappropriate thoughts.. I think.. Yes, that would be it.. It would be way to long to tell you so.. Probably she will tell you later when she wakes up..*points to me* But that won't be a while.. So bye! *hops into a random portal*
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
xD
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sarahxengland Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
*facepalm* ikr
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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Azu-nyan136 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012
*Facepalm* I can't believe Romano doesn't know what Baka means. Oh well~
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 29, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Lol yeah~
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nekootakugirl Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
"And then they had shower sex. The end c: lol XD"
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no. j-just no.
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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nekootakugirl Featured By Owner Oct 14, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
yeah, u-uh, I'd... that's just uh, really.
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not me. I'm more of a hopeless romantic, who tries to deny it.
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1wizgirl27 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
And then they had shower sex. The end c: lol XD
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh Romano~! :iconlustyromanoplz:
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Seronoviq Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Student Writer
lscwkioj;d2ld i like it! : D
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thankies~!
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xCreativePoppet Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice! I haven't read a really good reader insert in a while. :)
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww~ Thank you~
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ILuvArthurKirkland Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love how the got together by the reader having to pee
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PastaChan415 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
LOL
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ILuvArthurKirkland Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It's the best!
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